sakuXhina accentuated linearts

so it's the second version of my saku hina colorisation!!! i have just redraw with my tablet the linearts!!!!!
i'm not a fan of yuuri!!!!!
but i love this two characters!!!!!!
the background is very very very difficult^^
it's the first time that i make a background only by computer!!!
i'm proud of me !!!!!
i want to know your advice absolutly !!!!!!
3h for colorisation
characters (c) naruto shippuden
lineart (c) tabe-chan and me
colorisation by me^^
i know i work many with her but i love her style^^